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Roxas true love

Axel and Roxas were sitting on the bed when they heard a noise.
Roxas got up and herd Demyx scream, the last thing they herd from him was he went outside with Larxene. Roxas went over to the bed beside Axel. Axel said "Roxas? do you love me?"  Roxas sat in silence he dident know how to awnser..... " Axel... i...i.." then right before he replied Demyx broke down the door and said " I killed Larxene! " Axel sprung up and said " You killed her? how? " Roxas looked at the floor. Axel sat back down beside Roxas and then Larxene walked in and said " I am not dead you couldn't have killed me even if you tryed!" She wiped her hair from her soaking wet face and all the boys in the room thought Larxene had rabbies. Her face was covered in acne. Axel got up and pushed Demyx out of the room then tried to convince Larxene out and it finally worked.


Meanwhile Demyx went to Xigbar's room and " played " in there like 2 responsible men should. Larxene walked in on them and all Axel and Roxas could here was the terrible shriek of Larxene. Axel thought.... " If i leave Roxas.. to go see whats wrong will i ever find out if he loves me? " Roxas stood up and said.. " Axel i will reply to your question yes yes i do love you... " While Roxas was saying this he took his shirt off slowly... Axel's eyes stayed on Roxas.... Axel stood up beside him and took his pants off.....


After Demyx got off his day job at 6:30 he went to Axel's door and asked for his pay but Axel did not reply. Demyx opened the door slightly to find.... Axel and Roxas on the bed under the covers!
©2008-2009 ~SasukeUchiha2
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Author's Comments

my first chapter i did not right it on paper soo... i did it at school xD tell me what you guys think ok? <3 thanks

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:iconnear-x-rukia:
o.O i like it >>>>3
xD :iconimhappyplz:

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I barf RAINBOWS :3
:iconsasukeuchiha2:
i dont know what to put next.... writers block xD

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For every fish i see in the sea i can tell you what i see. i see sixteen fish in this sea, this sea is made for you and me. and i guess him... and her.... you....ok enough!!!
:iconnear-x-rukia:
lol i get that all the time xD

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I barf RAINBOWS :3
:iconsasukeuchiha2:
same.... xD 8D

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For every fish i see in the sea i can tell you what i see. i see sixteen fish in this sea, this sea is made for you and me. and i guess him... and her.... you....ok enough!!!
:iconlastdarkestninja:
it was pretty cool... needs more suspence.... lol nice job tough :thumbsup:

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~ DO NOT ZOMBIE WALK DOWN STAIRS! I speak from experience....~
:iconsasukeuchiha2:
by what do you mean suspence?

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For every fish i see in the sea i can tell you what i see. i see sixteen fish in this sea, this sea is made for you and me. and i guess him... and her.... you....ok enough!!!
:iconpistelpete:
"heard"

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i found this picture 4 ma avatar on google, so don't yell at me please...

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:iconsasukeuchiha2:
what?

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For every fish i see in the sea i can tell you what i see. i see sixteen fish in this sea, this sea is made for you and me. and i guess him... and her.... you....ok enough!!!
:iconlastdarkestninja:
idk... add some more stuff.... like add more desription, add up on all of the smexyness. right now you jump from thing to thing, which is understandable becuse you didn't have it on paper first, but if you add some suspence you'll be famouse in no time... i'll give you a link of a great story i found... brb

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~ DO NOT ZOMBIE WALK DOWN STAIRS! I speak from experience....~
:iconlastdarkestninja:
here is a great example... trust me you'll love it --> [link]

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~ DO NOT ZOMBIE WALK DOWN STAIRS! I speak from experience....~

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